Luz
is a second story surrounding the character Kara Jagger, completed in December, 2011. It is currently in revisions.
In a recent contest with Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award, one of my prizes for finishing among the top five percent of finalists in the young adult category was to receive this Publisher's Weekly review:
ABNA Publishers Weekly Review:
An ex-girlfriend wants her boyfriend back after a year abroad, but he’s cozied up with someone else in this boarding school love triangle that is sure to please... Senior Kara’s back at Trinity, a New Mexico boarding school, after a year exchange program in Australia. Ex-boyfriend Ryan has moved on and is hot-and-heavy with his new girlfriend, Christy. Even though she suggested they see other people while she was away, Kara is unsettled being alone at school and orchestrates a plan to get Ryan back. But mean-girl Christy will do everything she can to prevent that from happening. This well-paced story is strong on analyzing Kara’s mixed emotions: she doesn’t want Ryan, then she does, or perhaps it’s a case of “reverse culture shock.” Meanwhile, she’s got lingering feelings for her Australian boyfriend, Ben, and she’s not getting much help from her best friends, who are distant and have their own problems... And even though Ben’s appearance in the story is sparse considering how much Kara was affected by that relationship, it is an overall a satisfying read with girl-fights and some age-appropriate passionate moments.*
* Publishers Weekly is an independent organization and the review was written based on a manuscript version of the book and not a published version.




